Flyer
Crashed to the ground, fault in my flight,
and you’d criticize me for my bruises.
You have flown better.
Congratulations.
Now if only you were as good
at showing kindness to the fallen.
But surely a part of you has scratched the ground.
Where else could you have dug up this trait
of judgement?
Surely you could not learn such things from heavan.
For one so close to the sun, you do excel at frostiness.
and you’d criticize me for my bruises.
You have flown better.
Congratulations.
Now if only you were as good
at showing kindness to the fallen.
But surely a part of you has scratched the ground.
Where else could you have dug up this trait
of judgement?
Surely you could not learn such things from heavan.
For one so close to the sun, you do excel at frostiness.
posted by TwistedNoggin at 6:42 PM
2 Comments:
I like the last one too, but this one has teeth and turns the magnficiation around. I like it.
"Where else could you have dug up this trait of judgment? Surely you could not learn such things from heaven." . . . ouch. I hope no one ever says something like that to me.
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