Monday, November 07, 2005

Change rattles the foundation
Of every life, sometime.
Life will shake loose your footing
As it often has done mine.

Now, you too must learn to stand
on shifting ground, my dear.
It is tricky work, but you’ll catch on
As your will outweighs the fear.

I cannot still this agitated earth,
Nor harsh landings like this forestall.
But as long as I walk upon this globe,
I will catch you when you fall.

1 Comments:

Blogger Anonymous Poet said...

Wonderful! I really like the rhythm and soft rhymes in this piece.

The voice is that of a quiet, subtle, knowing whisper. Well done!


A couple of suggestions, though. Perhaps (?) you should add an s to sometime(s).

Maybe it should be: "As it has often done mine." For me, anyway, the rhythm reads a little more naturally.

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