Tuesday, March 07, 2006

Anybody wanna help me out, here?

I know it's cheesy anyway, but editing help is appreciated just the same....

Easy to look down your nose at others
When you’re flat on your back in the mud;
But the strong lift up those around them.
Only weak ones resort to a snub.

A wise man finds much still to learn
from every soul he meets.
A fool sees no value in others,
and is thus too dumb to teach.

If you need to drag down a person
To lift yourself up high
That itself proves he was above you
And that you were too weak to fly. (-lame, requires edit)

To be wise, see the insight of others.
To be great, bring them into your arms.
To be strong, strengthen those around you
And blah blah blah blah blah blah blarms.(-requires line)

2 Comments:

Blogger TwistedNoggin said...

here's one possible edit, but it's still mighty cheesy:

Easy to look down your nose at others
When you’re flat on your back in the mud;
But the strong lift up those around them.
Only weak ones resort to a snub.

A wise man finds much still to learn
From every soul he meets.
A fool sees no value in others,
And is thus too dumb to teach.

To be wise, see the insight of others.
To be great, inspire men to unite.
To be strong, strengthen those around you
To shine, see not darkness, but light.

2:33 PM  
Blogger TwistedNoggin said...

next edit (weird, no-one usually sees this process)

Easy to look down your nose at others
When you’re flat on your back in the mud;
But the strong lift up those around them.
The weak resort to a snub.

A wise man finds much still to learn
From every soul he meets.
The ignorant cannot value others.
Such fools, no one can teach.

To be wise, see the insight of others.
To be great, inspire men to unite.
To be strong, strengthen those around you
To shine, see not darkness, but light.

9:25 AM  

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